If you like sad cheesy poetry read this i didnt write it though i know the person who did,.?

what do you think of this.How does it make you feel.(i feel like doctor phil hahah!)

chained down by reality cut open by stress

So down to earth her wrist has a gashing crevis

So scared sad and confused a mess

She feels like everyone could care less

Black mascara and eyeliner running down her pale pink cheeks

Along with the tears of misery puring down like a stream

Red lipstick smeared across her thick lips

The same color as the blood running down her wrists

lieing on the cold linoleum floor

her dark hair across her face she has been here before

Her brown eyes filled with a pained __expression so far from dry

she knows she has to leave here this is her last cry

cracks open a bottle of toxic stuff poors it down her throat

falls down to the floor as her favorite band pumping through the speakers plays the last note

closes her eyes her brain turns off

her boyfriend comes home and he wants to scoff

Why because she looked so elegant in that black dress

with her pretty little face and dark makeup her black hair a mess

he holds her as tears fall from his face

One last time he kisses her ruby lips and can taste her beauty and grace!

If you like sad cheesy poetry read this i didnt write it though i know the person who did,.?

i like it...sounds like it could be made into a song

If you like sad cheesy poetry read this i didnt write it though i know the person who did,.?

i liked it. I just hope your friend wasnt thinking about herself when she wrote this

If you like sad cheesy poetry read this i didnt write it though i know the person who did,.?

This is very sad. The writer did an awesome job!