*****POETRY***** care to comment * my first try BLINKS*?

My first try

The sky was dark

The moon was high

We were alone

Just she and I

Her hair was black

Her eyes were too

I knew just what

She wanted to do

So with my courage

I did my best

And placed my hand

Upon her breast

I trembled and shook

And felt her heart

Slowly she spread

Her legs apart

I knew she was ready

But I didn't know how

It was my first try

At milking a cow

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My First Time

The sky was dark

The moon was high

All alone just she and I.

Her hair was soft

Her eyes were blue

I knew just what she wanted to do.

Her skin so soft

Her legs so fine

I ran my fingers down her spine.

I didn't know how

But I tried my best

I started by placing my hands on her breast.

I remember my fear my fast beating heart

But slowly she spread her legs apart

And when I did it I felt no shame.

All at once the white stuff came

At last it's finished it's all over now

My first time ever at milking a cow.....

- unknown

*****POETRY***** care to comment * my first try BLINKS*?

It's good at the end it's funny.

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It was good for comedy poetry!

the last bit kind of spoils the beauty of serious poetry.

but yeah..good rhyming (:

x

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cute. but ive heard it before.

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hahaha

I LOVE IT!!!!

this is amazing

i was getting kinda hot towards the middle, but then shhhaaaaazam!!!

hehe

classic :P

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fantastic -- well done -- drew me in then delivered the final line.

Great Poem

any more?

Have a STAR for this one mate

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HAHAha well at first i thought it was totally inappropriate, great stuff, but do you write serious poetry? I think you have talent.

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Whoa, I thought that was going to the nasty side of poetry! That was really good, I especially love the end. It was funny, but it sounds deep minus the last line! 5 *****!!!

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ROFLMFAO! bravo bravo. that was great lol. i had to double take it and make sure read it right. my gf and i laughed our as$es off. good job

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hahahha...i didnt expect that ending!

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lol..loved it

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Yo goldense.....this was Hot!!!!!!!!!!!

really liked the flow %26amp; how you made comical

for a moment there i felt like it was something

i would do.........Bless..