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what do you think of this.How does it make you feel.(i feel like doctor phil hahah!)

chained down by reality cut open by stress

So down to earth her wrist has a gashing crevis

So scared sad and confused a mess

She feels like everyone could care less

Black mascara and eyeliner running down her pale pink cheeks

Along with the tears of misery puring down like a stream

Red lipstick smeared across her thick lips

The same color as the blood running down her wrists

lieing on the cold linoleum floor

her dark hair across her face she has been here before

Her brown eyes filled with a pained __expression so far from dry

she knows she has to leave here this is her last cry

cracks open a bottle of toxic stuff poors it down her throat

falls down to the floor as her favorite band pumping through the speakers plays the last note

closes her eyes her brain turns off

her boyfriend comes home and he wants to scoff

Why because she looked so elegant in that black dress

with her pretty little face and dark makeup her black hair a mess

he holds her as tears fall from his face

One lastt time he kisses her ruby lips and can taste her beauty and grace.

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Wow, beautiful yet dark......

talented

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what band did you rip those lyrics off from? Report It

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I didn't even finish reading to know that this is dreck.

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GET A LIFE................YOU NEED ONE BAD.....................

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Depressed.

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Sounds like a real bad hair day.

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to long

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Motley Crew?

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thats hot but you have her lieing on the floor and sfalling don to the floor if she is already ther then she can fall down ....BUT your good that was offical

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good, but i think you should get help, you seem suicidal

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Wow this is one of the best thing I have read in a long time it is very good indeed there is no doubt in my mind that you have a talent that not allot of people can have (me) hahaha it's very nice keep doing this!!!!!!! Really really wonderful good job an A+ no doubt about that love it :)

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sounds tragic, like something out 0f a novel book!

shes in love with the man who she is with but she is fed up of being poor and feeling isolated

she has dreamed of a far better life for herself in the past and eventually reality has finally hit her hard and she now tells herself that there is know hope of a much better life for her and her man and the music that she is listening to would normally lift her spirits up but instead it brings her down even more and she drinks a bottle of rat poison and some alchol falls to the kitchen floor and lays there not making a sound but has tears flowing down her face eventually she lays there dead 3 hours later her boy friend come home from working in a dead end job that only pays the minimum wage he is feeling hungry as he walks into the kitchen and is stunned to see his woman lying on the floor he bends down moves the hair away from her angelic face and just stares for a while then the realisation that she is dead sinks in and the tears start to flow and as this is happening he lifts her head gently closer to his lips and kisses her with all his passion and undying love that he had for this love of his life...........the end!