If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

what do you think of this.How does it make you feel.(i feel like doctor phil hahah!)

chained down by reality cut open by stress

So down to earth her wrist has a gashing crevis

So scared sad and confused a mess

She feels like everyone could care less

Black mascara and eyeliner running down her pale pink cheeks

Along with the tears of misery puring down like a stream

Red lipstick smeared across her thick lips

The same color as the blood running down her wrists

lieing on the cold linoleum floor

her dark hair across her face she has been here before

Her brown eyes filled with a pained __expression so far from dry

she knows she has to leave here this is her last cry

cracks open a bottle of toxic stuff poors it down her throat

falls down to the floor as her favorite band pumping through the speakers plays the last note

closes her eyes her brain turns off

her boyfriend comes home and he wants to scoff

Why because she looked so elegant in that black dress

with her pretty little face and dark makeup her black hair a mess

he holds her as tears fall from his face

One last time he kisses her ruby lips and can taste her beauty and grace!

If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

Makes me want to cry because even though she felt she had nothing she had all she needed. The love of somebody can hold a person through some bad times. But she couldn't see that. She didn't see what was right in front of her. Some times people miss the little things in life and think that death is all that is left for them. When in all actuality there is somebody that will miss you so much that they will feel that without you there is only death. So the cycle of death continues.

If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

sorrow

If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

That is really sad. I think the person who wrote that was in a lot of pain.

If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

i think it is a marvelous poem... who wrote it? but i also think that the extra details put it off rythym, but it's a beautiful poem

If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

my prayer for my husband and children - Apr. 17, 2005 at 11:46 PM

i hold u in my arms

i breathe your every breath

i take away your pain

until there is nothing left

if i take it all away

will u just be a shell

for is that all that is u

just a lifetime of hell

i pray each day and night

i can protect u from life

but i know that i can't

u have to take it in strife

i feel all your pain

i cry all your tears

but so many tears to fall

in all the many years

i can't hide u from the world

so i'll stand by your side

and keep your faith in God

through him i'll be your guide

so love all u can

and thank God every day

for I will always love u

and for your faith i pray

If you like poetry read this its kinda depressing but sweet and no i did not write it!?

sounds like a 17 year old teenie crying from boredom .. nothin valuable there about a mill of those scrathced in notebooks per day